He was walking down the road when he crossed her shop. He had stopped momentarily with no intention walking in when with his next breath he took in the fresh, warm aroma of hot cake. The kind that makes you take a deep breath and fills you with warmth and joy. He walked in, guided by his nose and saw her laying the cakes out. He gestured with his finger for one and she smiled as she put one on plate for him. He sat down and took a small bite while she smiled in return at his happy smile.
Written for 100 words on Saturday – Week 9 Prompt: Quiet Conversations
13 thoughts on “Quiet Conversations”
compelling post for 100 words. I mean the tough thing is to write an accurate and attractive 100 words:)
These are the best kind of conversations. 🙂
Mmmm..that’s a delicious conversation- for sure! Thanks for joining in this week.
I want that freshly baked hot cake ….. Like NOW.
Barista jaao 😀
But, yea, please hand over the cake! 😛
Come to India 😀
this is a wonderful story.
Oh my! I could visualise the scene and almost taste the cake. Nice!
Nice story and nice conversation – cake and a smile.
Dropping by from 100 words.
Lucky you! Choco cake and her beautiful smile…choco cake can lead to lotsa other thgs..y not a love story..hehhe
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